Hi, I’m not really a blogger, I’m an old manuscript assessor, assessing mostly fiction. What I’ve noticed is that a lot of the things people in the game take for granted writers starting out simply don’t know – how wide should your margins be? Should you use double spacing or single? Where’s the best place to put the page numbers? What spelling should I follow? Oh and lots more.
So I thought I might lay out a few tips for those writing their first long work (and those writing short stories, let’s not forget them), be it fiction, non fiction or memoir. Every Sunday, I’ll try to put something here that I think might be helpful.
You want more information? Okay. (Sorry about the change in POV.)
DANIELLE de Valera’s father swore she was related on her mother’s side to Eamon de Valera, the controversial Irish politician — but he told some tall tales in his time, and this could be one of them. What we do know is that she was born in Sydney, 1938, educated Brisbane and Townsville. In 1959, she obtained a B Agr Sc. from the University of Queensland, worked as a botanist for a couple of years and later, as a copy-editor for The Jacaranda Press. A freelance manuscript assessor and fiction editor since 1992, she runs the Patrick de Valera Manuscript Appraisal Agency, where she helps aspiring writers to hone their work and ultimately get published. As well as this blog, she has another, more airy-fairy one at http:www.ecademy.com/blog/danielledevalera
A published author in her own right, in August 2011 her 108,000 word fiction manuscript SOME KIND OF ROMANTIC was one of 4 shortlisted for the Byron Bay Writers’ Festival Unpublished Manuscript Award. In 2012, it was short-listed in the UK for the Impress Prize. In 2001, with former client and cowriter Lucy Forster, whose rom-com novel FINDING ELIZABETH has just been released, she won the Australia & New Zealand-wide Emma Darcy Award for Romance Manuscript of the Year 2000 with FOUND: ONE LOVER. She has also won numerous awards for her short stories, which have been published in such diverse publications as PENTHOUSE, AUREALIS and the AUSTRALIAN WOMEN’S WEEKLY, and are currently in six Australian anthologies. She is now revising her 70,000 word novel set in Mullumbimby and surrounds in 1986 — Byron Shire became the epicentre of the Australian dropout movement of the late ’70s, early ’80s, following the Nimbin Festival of 1973.
Most recent job: editing Allan Staines’ TO VANISH IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT, soon to be released by Pinedale Press.
If you know someone who’s struggling with a long work, or even a short one, she can help them hone it to publication standards. If there’s no hope for it, she’ll tell them that, too, but in such a way that they won’t have to be scraped up off the floor and put together again by understanding friends and family. Her clients come from all over Australia, plus the UK and USA. You can email her at patrickdevalera@gmail.com, phone her at +61 0266803073, or text her at +61 466 013 199.
And remember: as the character Larry says in THROW MOMMA FROM THE TRAIN: ‘A writer writes, always.’
Input and advice from other writers is always helpful, I look forward to seeing what you come up with!
Thanks, I haven’t done anything new since the snake blog, I’ve been investigating the social media sites. I’m currently interested in figuring out how digiPOD writers can maximise their sales. It’s taking SOME TIME.
Best,
Danielle
Hi Danielle, somewhere I’ve seen an article on what not to do if you don’t want your book to be successful e.g. Don’t get it edited by a professional editor, do all your corrections as you write, give your writing to a good friend to review etc. Do you remember ever seeing anything like that? If so, where? You also might like to have a look at: http://dmiracle.com and his article on ‘Client Producing Websites’. Stephen Chong on BCC recommended it and it looks as though it may be pertinent to what you’re doing – or maybe not! Cheers, Chris and Rebecca
Thanks, Chris, I can’t remember seeing anything like the article you mention, although there are a lot of blogs I access through the Book Designer that have similar hints in them – he’s really worth subscribing to as he covers a lot of other people’s blogs who are in the business. I’m just in the throes of learning how to format short stories for Smashwords (and later, for Amazon); I want to put up one a month until September ’13 in the lead up to the book launch. Great to hear from you.
All the best to you & Rebecca,
Danielle
Thanks for finally writing about >Tips for Writers 1: Introduction | Danielle deValera <Loved it!
The Introduction amd About’s been there since the year dot, I think, Lilliana, but I’m glad you liked it.
Happy surfing!
Hmm it appears like your website ate my first
comment (it was extremely long) so I guess I’ll just sum it up what I submitted and say, I’m thoroughly enjoying your blog.
I as well am an aspiring blog writer but I’m still new to the whole thing. Do you have any points for beginner blog writers? I’d really appreciate it.
Thanks so much for your kind comment. I think it depends on why you’ve decided to blog. If it’s because you believe that having a platform will help sell your books, frankly, I doubt that the time and effort needed to put out a blog a week say, is going to pay off. I think How to blogs are the ones that notch up the followers; if it’s a more personal blog, I think keeping it to around 500 words is a good idea, and including at least one illustration. In either case, using lots of categories and tags will help people find you. I hope this has been of some help to you.
All the very best,
Danielle